Tuesday, October 6, 2009

Script/scene rough draft #1 for 7 Vignettes Project

One reaction to loneliness: having children

Opens up with shot of girl sitting on a bench at a park. She is staring at children playing on the toys.

Cut to scene: Shot from entrance. Girl walks into into a bar, walks out front door with random guy.

Cut to scene: girl is pregnant, drinking a milkshake, swinging on swing set at a park, kicking her legs.
Shot from below, and super close up to face, looking upwards.


OR

Another reaction: marriage (based on loneliness and not necessarily love)

Opens up with girl working at cafe, guy walks up to her. (slow)
Cut to them sitting at a theater next to each other, not touching. (brief)
Cut to them with backs to each other, each on a laptop.
Cut to them sitting side by side reading books.
Cut to them walking down shopping aisle at grocery store. Med. to long shot, from front. (brief)
Cut to them walking down marriage aisle at wedding. Med shot to close shot, from front. (slow)

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